Ok so here's the thing. I'm going to write a roman kinda story.

but i need your opinion about it...
I have the first small scrap part:
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"hmm.. What do you think about this?". Rosy got out of the changing room and showed her new outfit to Adam. What she hasn't noticed, is that Adam was having a heavy conversation with his mom on the phone.
Rosy is a very short tempered girl, so she naturally gets annoyed when she feels ignored. Yet, Adam didn't gave her any attention at all. "Adam! C'mon! tell me what you think! grr... I hate it when you do that!" she said. Adam yelled something to his mom, hang up the phone, and then finally, he gave Rosy a look. First he looked at her telling her without saying something he did NOT liked what she said when he was arguing with his mother, but a moment later, when he saw the rest of her body, he began to blush, and stottering and after that he was amazed; Rosys' new outfit was made for her -or Rosy was born for the outfit, he didn't knew-. "And...? and and and?" Rosy asked. She was really getting annoyed by the wat Adam was staring at her without saying anything. But just before she was going to kick his ass, he walked closer to her and softly wispered in her ear: "You look more beatiful than ever before. I'm so sorry that i haven't SEEN it before." Rosys'hard stopped beating, almost liturally. She felt her face getting red. "That... that is the most sweetest thing... you have ever said to me... Oh damn you you made me blush like a little girl!" she said. They laughed. Rosy bought the outfit -containing a short skirt, a sweet bonnet, and a white tight tee- and proudly weared it as Rosy and Adam were heading to Rosys' place.
When they arrived, nobody was home. and suddenly Rosy's face was VERY serious and she asked Adam "I am 15 yrs old, but am i still a little girl?" Adam laughed. Rosy really was crazy, in a good way. He answered "That completely depnds on you." She wasn't satisfied with that answer and continued; "But what do YOU think?" She got really close to Adam now. He could smell her breath: Fresh and fruity. "I think you are one special girl" he answered. Adam wanted to say something that she would only understand when she would think really hard, but before he could say it he was shocked, amazed and above all intensely happy; He felt warm lips meeting his own. Suddenly, but softly. Her blonde hair had a strange gold glow in the sunset. He closed his eyes, holded her tight and opened his mouth. She did the same.
to be continued
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So what ya think?
oh and yes i know the english is really bad. but i'm trying as hard as i can to not make it look so awefully bad. Sorry.